~*~Username and Title: I don't like the misspelling on the username purposeful or not. However, I do like the title. It seems a little bit nostalgic (well a lot nostalgic really) and it goes well. -4/5.

~*~Thoughts While The Page Was Loading:My feet are really warm, ooh I kind of like that picture. -4/5.

The Starlit-Lily Factor:

~*~Does Your Soul Shine Through?Definetly. You let little shimmers zip through the cracks like lightning beams. As a reader one gets a true sense of you almost all of the time.-34/35.

~*~Are You Observant Of Beauty? Right from the start you had beautiful, soulful writing. You saw there was beauty out there. But I think age and a little bit of insecurity mixed with inexperience got in the way. You sort of had a tainted view of the beauty around you. A lot of times you were looking for it but it was either out of your grasp or it was right under your nose but something kept it from you. Don't overlook the obvious. -25/35.

Layout:

I have mixed feelings about the layout. On one hand I think the blurred simple image works with the theme of your diary. It gives it that hazy end of summer feeling. It made me want to jump in the car at dusk with the windows rolled down and my bare feet out of the window. On the other hand it also comes off as overly simplified and boring. I think it works out for the best though. -15/20.

Navigation:

To the right, nothing special. -9/10.

Content:

~*~Your Content: I skimmed through 2003 and read most if not all of 2004. You have a lot of really good entries and I enjoy your poetry though a few times I had trouble figuring out whether you were the author or if you were quoting someone. Either way. Like I said before, you seem to have a really soulful diary even at it's bleakest points. I wish that you could always see the bright side of things but that is idealistic and nearly impossible. I really liked your diary a lot because it had a real poignancy to it. It seems like the kind of journal that makes you sit back and think, even with it's inconsistency. You could go from beautiful prose to preteen whining in one day. Other than that, not bad. -65/70.

~*~Your Grammar and Spelling: Nothing substantial here.-10/10.

Extras:
You had a few, not a lot, but I liked the origin of neverforgett.-7/10.

Will I Return?

Honestly, I think I will.

Comments:

I don't have anything really life altering to say. I liked your diary and the glimpses into your life. There is something very set about you, something strong there, though you may not see it. Keep it up.

Total:173/200.

Fade - Glow

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