~*~Username and Title: It seems a bit uncreative to me to have the title the same as the username. Though the username is nice, it isn't so nice as to use to as a blanketing title for your entire page. - -2/5.

~*~Thoughts While The Page Was Loading:Man I have a monster headache and yellow is just not what I am looking for right now. -2/5.

The Starlit-Lily Factor:

~*~Does Your Soul Shine Through?Yes, but a weak yes. Because there is so much darkness surrounding it that all your soul can do is shine through. You care a lot about some really important things. And yet you surround yourself with such negativity I don't know what to think.-20/35.

~*~Are You Observant Of Beauty? Somebody once said to me that "Beauty is always painful." And I didn't get it then but I do now. There is a darker side to everything, beauty included. And you see that as well as the light. For some diaries and some people, that works. For some it doesn't. You see beauty and you study it carefully, you break it down into your life. Yet I think you just miss the point, your self doubt is encompassing. It is like a blindfold. Beauty wants to be a part of your life but something holds you and it back. It's there, just look for it. -20/35.

Layout:

You said yourself that you weren't really a fan of the yellow and I sort of agree, though that is probably the headache talking. You designed this yourself and I like that, it gives it a more personal feel. However, there is a lot of empty space to the right, maybe you could do something with that. -15/20.

Navigation:

To the left, categorized. -10/10.

Content:

~*~Your Content: I read your entire diary. And I was annoyed on one hand because your entries are COMPLETLEY out of order. They jump from one month to the next month . From 2004 to 2003 and back to 2004. Fix that, please, I was so thoroughly annoyed it was ridiculous. Massive point loss here.

However, from what I could figure out, something about you pulled on my heart strings and I am not sure why. Maybe I see a little bit of me in you or vice versa. I'm not sure, but reading your diary I saw a girl who wants to be happy but it just seems like something kicked her down. It's like a child that touched the stove, you're always going to be afraid of being burnt now and it's sad.

This entry got to me which is why I mentioned it before. When you wrote that line, "Happy things. I was supposed to talk about happy things." I don't know why, but I honestly felt like I wanted to go to you and just hug you. Because I know where you are in life and it hurts so much to feel so unstable. I'm sorry for that. Maybe with time that will ease itself away. -50/70.

~*~Your Grammar and Spelling: Nothing substantial here.-10/10.

Extras:
You had a few, basically just random facts on yourself, nothing extra special. -5/10.

Will I Return?

Possibly. I liked something about you, I may check back.

Comments:

Fix your entries into set dates. And keep your chin up. Things wil get better in time, or you will get stronger. Life's funny that way.

Total:134/200.

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