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Snccharlotte's Review

February 21, 2004 @ 12:21 a.m.

Snccharlotte- ~*!*~ Kinda bad really....

First Impressions:

~*~Username and Title:The screenname undoubtedly has some sort of significance, but all I can think of for a meaning is southern Charlotte, North Carolina. Which, unless you're from there, makes no sense. The title doesn't impress me, though I can only assume it's in reference to the plethora of drama in your life.-1/5.

~*~Thoughts While The Page Was Loading:Oooh...a layout I haven't seen before...and...yes! She shoots, she scores, it's not aesthetically displeasing!-4/5.

The Starlit-Lily Factor:

~*~Does Your Soul Shine Through?I think so. You're a feisty little thing, though not someone I would avoid, per se, offline. You seem to be very protective of those you love, and you're very loving indeed. You seem to have a considerable amount of compassion, which I admire. Keep it up. It seems like a curse because of all the drama in your life, but compassion is a good thing to have. I've known too many people without it.-28/35.

~*~Are You Observant Of Beauty?Hmm...if you were, and I missed it, I apologize, but...transcendentally speaking, not from what you showed me. You show a lot of love for your boyfriend, and at times, for your family, and for your friends, but that's it. You don't really look beyond your sphere, as far as I can tell. I mean, that's not always bad...but it's not what I'm looking for, with this review site. Because I have a soft spot for lovers...-15/35.

Layout:

I like this layout quite a bit. I'm not entirely sure who the girl in the image is, but she's lovely. The colors go beautifully together. I love the entry box size, the font, the colors--yes, yes. The only thing is, your archives page does not match your entry pages. Fix it, please.-16/20.

Navigation:

The links...I'm rather "Meh" about. They could be organized a bit differently. The color's good, the hover effect, while pretty basic, is good...but, the links up at the top are small. Too small. All in all, they're there, they're good.-7/10.

Content:

~*~Your Content:I read everything. That being said...

...Holy Goddess, you sure can preach about drama, can't you? Your life sounds, though you've graduated, very, very high school. As I am counting down the days, hours and minutes until I can be free of that mess, I feel for you. Your situation seems rather messy, with Desiree and Agnes. (Poor girl. What a name.)However...

You seem rather hostile about a lot of things. Not that you don't undoubtedly have good reason for being that way, but you often seem belligerent and stuborn. You don't seem to really know if you could've prevented some of your own dilemmas; you don't really seem to care either. I find this odd.

You daylog, and discuss your friends a lot. You talk about your boyfriend a lot. It's sweet at first. Then it gets boring. Then it gets nauseating. Then it gets creepy. You never made the creepy point, but you hit the first two pretty well. I'm glad you love your boyfriend so much...but there's life beyond him, you know. I'm just very glad he's good to you. Just be kind to yourself, as well, and remember that you are both still very young.

Your style of writing isn't bad. You seem to have a modicum of intelligence, though you mention sex a lot. It seems like it's a bit of a big priority to you. Is it? If not, do be sure to clarify that, or treat the subject a little more carefully.

My final statement about your content? I won't have to watch Days of Our Lives for about a year now.-54/70.

~*~Your Grammar and Spelling:Not bad, not bad. Could've been better, but I've seen far worse. I've had nightmares from seeing worse.-7/10.

Extras:
Meh. Some. Not enough. There could be more.-10/10.

Will I Return?

Maybe.

Comments:

I hope you and your boyfriend are able to stay as happy as you are. I also hope you can clear out some of the drama soon. Brightest blessings to you.

Total:142/200.

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